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How to Agree or Disagree Clearly and Persuasively
In this lesson, you’ll learn how to write a well-structured opinion essay where you either agree or disagree with a given statement. You’ll discover how to:
Review the full example below to see these techniques in action!
Task: Scientists and technology experts are more valuable to society than artists. To what extent do you agree with this view?
It is often suggested that scientists and technology experts contribute more to society than artists. I agree with this view. Although it isn’t easy to measure someone’s value to society, I personally feel that scientists and technology experts have a more significant impact not only on our society’s economy, but also on essential services that improve our quality of life.
First of all, science, technology, and the arts are all very productive industries. However, while there is a shortage of scientists and technicians, there tend to be fewer jobs available for creative workers. As a result, creative people often spend more time unemployed, in temporary, low-skilled jobs, or working on eccentric projects that would need to generate more income. Consequently, they contribute less to society financially. An example of this is a study conducted in the United States which revealed that approximately 64% of individuals with a degree in the arts end up working in fields unrelated to their artistic expertise.
Secondly, although art and music are often greatly respected and appreciated, it is possible to survive without them. On the other hand, science and technology are necessary to provide power, water, medicine, communications, food and much more. Therefore, we could argue that experts in these fields are far more valuable. For instance, in times of crisis or natural disasters, it is scientific advancements that prove critical in saving lives and rebuilding communities.
In conclusion, I believe scientists and technology experts contribute significantly more to society than artists. They have more job opportunities and play a vital part in fields like healthcare, infrastructure, and innovation. While art and music hold great cultural value, the role of science and technology in providing essential services and improving lives makes them more valuable contributors to society overall.
Don’t change key terms like “scientists” or “artists” if synonyms might alter meaning. Instead, rephrase the rest:
Use cautious language to sound accurate and reasonable:
Acknowledge the other side respectfully:
Use these to explain consequences: